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Your next door owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog

#door #dog #night #neighbor
Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings, I hope
this
 letter finds you well, I am writing to you
conerning
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concerning
 a disturbing matter that
happens
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 because of your dog, and I would like you to take my
complain
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in
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into
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your
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consideration.
Firstly
, your dog was barking the whole night, and its voice was too loud, since you are
in
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the
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next door, I
was feeling
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 like it was barking here in my bedroom,
therefore
 it is really terrible and annoying to
here
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hear
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 that
everyday
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every day
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.
Additionally
, it is worth
to
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mentioning
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 that
last
 night I couldn't sleep well, and
as a result
 of that, I went to my job late,
moreover
, I missed a crucial meeting with one of my clients,
hence
 it was a disaster.
Finally
, I would like to request moving your dog away from your flat, if you keep it in the roof garden that would be nice,
furthermore
, many of our
neighbors
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neighbours
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 want to complain about that concerning matter too, and they have the same request. I am looking forward to your prompt action. Yours sincerely, John Adam
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Tone Adjustment
Consider using a friendlier tone to maintain a positive relationship with your neighbor.
Spelling & Punctuation
Check for spelling errors (e.g., 'hear' instead of 'here', 'concerning' instead of 'conerning') and punctuation for a polished presentation.
Paragraph Structure
Divide your concerns into clear, distinct paragraphs for better structure and readability.
Task Achievement
You effectively communicated the issue and its impact on your life.
Closing Politeness
Your closing remarks are polite, showing respect and patience.
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