The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020,with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020,with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how the population percentage changed in the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia, over a 50-year period, starting from 1970 and
also
represents the predictions for the upcoming 20 years.
Overall
, it can be seen that the total population is upward,
whereas
the range is consistently higher in Malaysia. Looking at the data sets that increased in more detail, it is evident that the growing number of people in Malaysia is about 30% to 80% from 1970 to 2040,which is the highest point on
this
chart.Next,to Indonesia, it
also
accelerated from 12% to 55% in 1970 to 2040 respectively. Turning to the remaining data sets which dramatically changed,it can be seen that the total population of the Philippines rose from 1970 to 1990 was approximately 31% to 48%,
therefore
, it declined by roughly 40% in 2010.
Furthermore
, it will be rising up to 50% in 2040.
Similarly
, the proportion of individuals in Thailand rose from 19% to 28% from 1970 to 1990,
therefore
it remains almost constant till 2020 and again will rise from 2020 to 2040 will about 32%.
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Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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