The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate the proportion of four different types of online shopping sales in four different sectors comprising travel, movies/audio, books and costumes in New Zealand in two years, 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, it is clear that
the travel sector was interesting to individuals. However
, in the next ten years, citizens were intrigued by film and music.
To begin
with, the travel online sales in the year 2003, occupied more than one-third and came in first place. Followed by clothes along with
film and music which accounted for 24% and 21% respectively, besides
, the online sales of the books sector registered only 19% in 2003.
Additionally
, after 10 years, the 1st/2nd as well as
3rd/4th place were swapped. The fraction in the
tourism dramatically dropped to 29% and it was surpassed by movies and audio which arrived at 33%. The percentage of the reading was in third place and minimally escalated by 3%. Correct article usage
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Furthermore
, garments overwhelmingly nosedived by 8% in the last
year of record.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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