The line graph provides us with information about number of books that were rented from various libraries from june to september 2014 while the pie chart presents percentage of borrowed books' genre.
The provided line graph shows the
number
of books
borrowed from many libraries from June
to September
2014. Meanwhile, the pie chart describes the types of books
which were borrowed.
Overall
, the trends of number
of books
borrowed from each library were different. In addition
, figures ranged from 50 books
to 300 books
. Moreover
, the total number
of books
from all libraries was categorised into six genres.
First,
the number
of books
borrowed from Ryeslip was on a downward trend. It dramatically decreased from 300 books
in June
to 160 books
in September
. In addition
, the figure of Sutton Wood fluctuated during the period. It climbed up from 250 books
in June
to 275 books
in July and then
went down to 100 books
in August. After that, it jumped up to 300 books
in September
. Furthermore
, the amount of West Eaton and Church Mount rose from 50 books
in June
to 150 books
in September
. They were on an upward trend.
As can be seen from the pie chart, fiction was the biggest portion at 43% followed by biography at 19%. Science and history contributed at the same rate which was 14%. Moreover
, self-help was at the bottom position. It occupied 10% of all genres.Submitted by Punpun on
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