The line graph provides us with information about number of books that were rented from various libraries from june to september 2014 while the pie chart presents percentage of borrowed books' genre.

The line graph provides us with information about number of books that were rented from various libraries from june to september 2014 while the pie chart presents percentage of borrowed books' genre.
The provided line graph shows the
number
of
books
borrowed from many libraries from
June
to
September
2014. Meanwhile, the pie chart describes the types of
books
which were borrowed.
Overall
, the trends of
number
of
books
borrowed from each library were different.
In addition
, figures ranged from 50
books
to 300
books
.
Moreover
, the total
number
of
books
from all libraries was categorised into six genres.
First,
the
number
of
books
borrowed from Ryeslip was on a downward trend. It dramatically decreased from 300
books
in
June
to 160
books
in
September
.
In addition
, the figure of Sutton Wood fluctuated during the period. It climbed up from 250
books
in
June
to 275
books
in July and
then
went down to 100
books
in August. After that, it jumped up to 300
books
in
September
.
Furthermore
, the amount of West Eaton and Church Mount rose from 50
books
in
June
to 150
books
in
September
. They were on an upward trend. As can be seen from the pie chart, fiction was the biggest portion at 43% followed by biography at 19%. Science and history contributed at the same rate which was 14%.
Moreover
, self-help was at the bottom position. It occupied 10% of all genres.
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