In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Across the globe, many nations focus on making money as their priority

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to solving other concerning issues.

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clearly has the benefits of increasing

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employment opportunities and improvement in infrastructures, but have the drawbacks of environmental degradation and social inequality. It is a positive outcome

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the nations as job opportunities will

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focusing on economic strategies often see a rise in employment rate

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of existing

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in infrastructures parallel to

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economic growth. The

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can enjoy better roads, public

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, schools, and hospitals, facilitating

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quality of life. For

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, in developed

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like New Zealand, the countries are able to provide free healthcare and

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for their citizens. On the other

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, one of the disadvantages of

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is environmental concerns. To keep up with the overwhelming development, more factories are made, causing

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, and more

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are being cut to develop new

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, the social gaps between the rich and higher becoming wider. The

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people cannot keep up with the opportunity and technology to survive in a rapidly evolving world without help from the states.

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, some developed countries provide

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for children from

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, to study to become professionals and able to provide for their

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economic gain can provide better facilities and more jobs,

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nature negatively and

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a disparity between

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