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The table below the results of a survey on workplace complaints in Germany in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below the results of a survey on workplace complaints in Germany in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows
responses
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 of workers about their workplace
complaints
 in Germany in 2001. It is
ease
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 to observe that
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most
men
 reported
annyowing
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annoying
 co-workers as
complaints
 in their office with a figure of 34%.
This
 is followed by
relationship
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 with the line manager and excessive noise. Those numbers are 22% and 20%, respectively. Unlike
men
, only 9% of
women
 reported annoying co-workers for their
complaints
 and 7% for
relationship
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relationships
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 with their managers.
According to
 the chart, it is obvious that both
men
 and
women
 have
substantially
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complaints
 about excessive noise, which
totaled
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totalled
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 23.0%. One
noticeble
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noticeable
 factor is that lack of privacy and technical support are the most reported responses among
women
. Both accounted for the majority of
women
’s
response
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responses
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 (21% and 16% respectively).
However
, those categories are not serious problems for
men
. They only reported 9% and 3% each.
In addition
, It is obvious that sexual harassment is
also
 a considerable matter, but
this
 is only for
women
. 10% of
women
 reported about
this
while
 1% of
men
 did.
Lastly
, temperature is the most minor
complaints
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complaint
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 for both of them.
Overall
,
it Is clear that
men
 have
complaints
 related to
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their relationship
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relationship
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relationships
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 with
ther collegues
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their colleagues
whereas
women
 consider more about their external environment at their workplace.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words complaints, men, women with synonyms.
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