You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
This
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pictures
illustrates the process of Change the determiner
picture
cheese
made from the Acidification Use synonyms
the
milk until selling it in the shops. Change preposition
of the
Overall
, Linking Words
according to
what is shown we can notice that it takes more than 2 months.
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Firstly
, acidification Linking Words
it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
to mix
the raw milk with Change the verb form
mixing
and
bacteria in Correct word choice
apply
steel
jar under pressure and high temperature. Correct article usage
a steel
Secondly
, the Linking Words
cheese
Use synonyms
take
a cube shape (Curds) and Change the verb form
takes
this
process Linking Words
nemed
is Solidification. Correct your spelling
named
need
Then
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cheese
Use synonyms
cut
into small pieces and Add a missing verb
is cut
return
to heating and draining. Wrong verb form
returned
While
, heating Linking Words
and
before the Correct word choice
apply
cheese
Use synonyms
back
to Add a missing verb
is back
soild
it Correct your spelling
solid
sold
mixed
with salt. Add a missing verb
is mixed
Then
, give it the shape and Linking Words
this
process Linking Words
named
by (Shaping). After, the seventh step, which, Add a missing verb
is named
it
is the longest step Correct pronoun usage
apply
it
takes two Correct pronoun usage
apply
moths
. Correct your spelling
months
Lastly
, Packaging Linking Words
this
step is different because it Linking Words
it
up to the company that packaging it. Correct your spelling
is
Then
, it came to shops or supermarkets.
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To sum
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up
everything has been Add a comma
up,
steted
so far, Correct your spelling
stated
tested
cheese
is made from raw milk and in 9 steps the Use synonyms
cheese
will Use synonyms
in
our Add a missing verb
be in
hand
.Fix the agreement mistake
hands
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cheese with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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