You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

This

pictures

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illustrates the process of

cheese

made from the Acidification

the

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of the

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milk until selling it in the shops.

Overall

,

according to

what is shown we can notice that it takes more than 2 months.

Firstly

, acidification

it

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apply

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is

to mix

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mixing

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the raw milk with

and

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bacteria in

steel

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a steel

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jar under pressure and high temperature.

Secondly

, the

cheese

take

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takes

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a cube shape (Curds) and

this

process

nemed

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named

need

is Solidification.

Then

cheese

cut

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is cut

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into small pieces and

return

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returned

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to heating and draining.

While

, heating

and

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before the

cheese

back

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is back

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to

soild

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solid

sold

it

mixed

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is mixed

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with salt.

Then

, give it the shape and

this

process

named

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is named

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by (Shaping). After, the seventh step, which,

it

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is the longest step

it

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takes two

moths

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months

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.

Lastly

, Packaging

this

step is different because it

it

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is

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up to the company that packaging it.

Then

, it came to shops or supermarkets.

To sum

up

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up,

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everything has been

steted

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stated

tested

so far,

cheese

is made from raw milk and in 9 steps the

cheese

will

in

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be in

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our

hand

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hands

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.