The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
The given map illustrates the images of the same island before and after the construction had been done for some tourist facilities.
The first one shows the
bared
land surrounded by the sea with only Replace the word
bare
few
coconut trees and,The Correct article usage
a few
beach
at the western side
of the atoll.
The second image represents the constructive island with a swimming area
of
the Change preposition
on
beach
side
. There is a pier at the southern sea of the Isle ,and also
the vehicle track starts from the pier and it runs around the reception
hall and until the restaurant. Reception
hall is situated middle of the land but more Add an article
The reception
to
Change preposition
on
beach
Add an article
the beach
side
. The restaurant is designed near th
Northern Correct your spelling
the
sea
Capitalize word
Sea
area
. ASAP right to the reception
there is a big accommodation Add a comma
reception,
area
noticed circularly at the central
of the land. Replace the word
centre
Also
an
another accommodation round Remove the article
apply
had
created left to the Verb problem
was
reception
and by the side
of the beach
. Foot -path
connected accommodation and go through the western Correct your spelling
Footpath
area
.
However
the development of the tourist ait tried to protect the natural aspectsAdd a comma
However,
,
because they did not harm at least one of Remove the comma
apply
trees
or the seashore.Correct article usage
the trees
Submitted by amalitharangani0Most of villagers are changing their accommodations from villages to cities all around the world. As a result of this countryside residents are lower than town areas.I think this is a negative development and in this essay, I will elaborate my perspectives furthermore.
According to this situation, my take on this is, different of the facilities between the town and the village. As an example, there are lots of shopping centres in the city such as house- hold items, clothes, stationeries, vehicles and so on. Conversely, developed educational centres, schools, hospitals with enough facilities are also at the urban areas. Nevertheless, there are lots of companies and unlimited job opportunities in the city area. Also, mostly there are continuous electricity, gas,water and well planned and punctual transport system as well. So people prefer to live in comfortably and moving to cities as they possible.
Additionally, villagers and town people's have same basic need. Such as food, accommodation, education, good health and freedom as well. In some countries there is unavailable electricity in the countryside. Also, there is poor transport system, teachers and facilities at village schools. Moreover, sometimes not enough medications and human resources. So countryside people preferred to move to town. Finally, countryside population decreased and urbanisation in cities.
In a nutshell, if there is as usual same facilities all over the city and rural areas,as there is lots of freedom in the countryside . My point of view is around the world this point is most prominent in developing countries.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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