The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
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The given map illustrates the images of the same island before and after the construction had been done for some tourist facilities. The first one shows the
bared
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land surrounded by the sea with only
few
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a few
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coconut trees and,The
beach
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at the western
side
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of the atoll. The second image represents the constructive island with a swimming
area
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of
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on
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the
beach
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side
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. There is a pier at the southern sea of the Isle ,and
also
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the vehicle track starts from the pier and it runs around the
reception
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hall and until the restaurant.
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Reception
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The reception
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hall is situated middle of the land but more
to
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on
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beach
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the beach
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side
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. The restaurant is designed near
th
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the
Northern
sea
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area
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. ASAP right to the
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reception
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reception,
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there is a big accommodation
area
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noticed circularly at the
central
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centre
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of the land.
Also
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an
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another accommodation round
had
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created left to the
reception
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and by the
side
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of the
beach
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.
Foot -path
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Footpath
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connected accommodation and go through the western
area
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.
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However
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the development of the tourist ait tried to protect the natural aspects
,
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because they did not harm at least one of
trees
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the trees
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or the seashore.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words beach, side, area, reception with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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