The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in the cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates how the population percentages in four Asian states living in towns over a
50-yeat
period, starting from 1970 and assumptions in 2030 and 2040.
Correct your spelling
50-year
Overall
it can be seen that people in Malaysia, Indonesia and Philippines
are interested Correct article usage
the Philippines
for
staying in the cities, Change the preposition
in
whereas
in Thailand, they are not like them.
Looking at the dataset in more detail it provides, in
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that in
Malaysia
it stood Add a comma
Malaysia,
about
30% in 1970. Change preposition
at about
Then
, in 1990 it was 43% and gradually increased. By 2040, it will 88
%, which will Add a missing verb
be 88
the
highest value in the graph. Add a missing verb
be the
Besides
, in Indonesia
it was 13% in 1970, which was the lowest in Add a comma
Indonesia,
this
figure and Thailand
was approximately 19% in 1970. Change preposition
in Thailand
Additionally
, they are similar in 2000, it was 28%. It will raise 61% and 45% in 2040, respectively.
Turning to the remaining information it shows that in 1979 Philippines
started Correct article usage
the Philippines
31
%. Change preposition
at 31
Moreover
, in 1990 it accelerated roughly
50% but in 2010 it decreased Change preposition
by roughly
into
45%. After that, they will grow Change preposition
to
51
% in 2030. Change preposition
by 51
Finally
, 52% in 2040.Submitted by Aafuankazinatoshi on
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