the pie graph below show the result of a survey of chlidern's activities . the first graph shows the cultural and lesiure activities that boys participate in , where the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate
The pie
chart
shows the differences between boys
and girls
their
culture and leisure Change preposition
in their
activities
.
Overall
, pies
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the pies
chart
were in the same level of percentage , as we compared between
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girls
and boys
, boys
are the highest on computer games. Likewise
, girls
are the best of
dancing .
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at
chart
, the first chart
illustrates boys
' activities
there were prefer playing computer games as
34% even though they playing basketball at 26% , In spite of Change preposition
at
boys
did
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read
any books , the percentage was 2% of reading . The second Wrong verb form
reading
chart
, girls'
cultural and leisure Add a missing verb
is girls'
activities
. They were more like dancing than reading . in the same way , girls
did a lot of activities
unlike
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, unlike
boys
! To
more information , Change preposition
For
girls
were listening to music and netball at 10 or 15 percentages
.Replace the word
per cent
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