The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given line graph shows the number of products transported in the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002 in four modes, comprised of
road
, water, rail, and pipeline
. Overall
, road
is the most popular by far from others, Add an article
the road
while
pipeline
is the lowest.
In 1978, Add an article
the pipeline
a pipeline
road
Add an article
the road
is
the top Wrong verb form
was
of
transportation Change preposition
apply
options
, which Fix the agreement mistake
option
used
for about 70 million tones. Add a missing verb
was used
Moreover
, both road
and water had the
similar volume of goods transported, Correct article usage
a
while
pipeline
Add an article
the pipeline
a pipeline
is
the least popular choice. By 1990, water had become more favoured as it increased by more than Wrong verb form
was
quarter
of the Correct article usage
a quarter
last
decade, thereby a decreased
in the number of items transported by rail which is about 10%.
In the most recently, Replace the word
decrease
road
had remained the best of transported modes with a significantly
growth, Change the adverb
significant
while
pipeline
had a small increased
which is around 10%. Replace the word
increase
However
, this
option had
remained Wrong verb form
has
least
popular Correct article usage
the least
options
for over about three decades.Fix the agreement mistake
option
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, pipeline with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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