The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eating too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eating too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eating too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the number of
type
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types
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of nutrients from the meals namely
Sodium
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, Saturated fat,
Added
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and Added
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Sugar
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the biggest contributor
of
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to
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unhealthy food was
dinner
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, and the lowest contributor was
breakfast
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. Looking at the
Sodium
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nutrient, the highest
contain
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contains
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of
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apply
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sodium
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from four meals was
dinner
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,
it
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which
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was around 43%,
and
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apply
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followed by Lunch was just under a
third,
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and
then
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,
breakfast
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and snacks
were
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had
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same the percentage
around
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of around
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14%. Moving to
the
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apply
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Saturated Fat,
the
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apply
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dinner
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still
the
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had the
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biggest percentage
in
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of
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saturated fat approximately 37%, and there was
significant
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a significant
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increased
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increase
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of
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in
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saturated fat from snacks around 21%.
Besides
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that, the number of saturated fat
on
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in
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lunch more lowest than
sodium
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was 26%, and
then
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,
for
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apply
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breakfast
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still
contains
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contained
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lowest
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the lowest
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saturated fat around 16%. Turning to
adding
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add
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sugar
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, the biggest meal
contain
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containing
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sugar
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was snacks around 42%,
and
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apply
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followed by
dinner
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aroud
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around
23%, and
then
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, lunch and
breakfast
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contains
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contained
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lowest
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the lowest
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sugar
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around 19%, and 16% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, dinner, breakfast with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average percentage
  • nutrients
  • sodium
  • saturated fat
  • added sugars
  • typical meals
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • snacks
  • consumption
  • excess
  • health implications
  • comparison
  • trend
  • pattern
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