The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates data about a percentage of citizens consisting of older people between the ages of 65 and older, in the
period
starting from 1940 till 2040 in three different countries, USA, Sweden and Japan
. As it
can be observed, life expectancy in all three countries is going to be climbed in the future sharply, approximately after 2024.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Firstly
, there are a few main features that have to be demonstrated. According to
the line, people of higher age groups in Japan
, the USA and Sweden were almost three times less in 1940 in comparison with the future period
from 2030 to 2040, around 10 per cent of the population
. Additionally
, as a matter of fact, the difference in the proportion might be noted in Japan
, where the decrease in the older population
had been from 1960 to 2020, equal around 3 per cent. However
, the proportion of the older population
in Japan
and Sweden in the same period
was approximately 15 per cent of the older population
.
Overall
, in accordance with the written information, it is supposed that the Japanese generation improved their level of life and consequently
increased their period
of life.Submitted by akhmedova.mb on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words period, japan, population with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼