The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Describe the main features of the figure
The table in question gives information about the salaries of
high
education teachers in the year 2009 .
Correct word choice
higher
Overall
, it is evident that in the Linking Words
end
3 countries had a marked increase , the others showed a corresponding decline .
Add a comma
end,
According to
the given data in the table , in both Australia and Linking Words
denmark
, they started in Change the capitalization
Denmark
less
numbers . Change the quantifier
fewer
Then
, they started to Linking Words
rose
after 15 years . Next , they remained steady . But Australia had more than Denmark in maximum salary .
In reference to the vital in the figure , Wrong verb form
rise
they
was a sharp lept in the Correct pronoun usage
there
last
third countries . Linking Words
However
, the Japan it is the highest . Afterwards, Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
korea
is a second higher country . In the end , the lower Change the capitalization
Korea
salary
are ( in Luxembourg , Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
Australia
) respectively and the in Correct word choice
and Australia
the
Correct article usage
apply
last
but least Linking Words
is
Denmark .Correct your spelling
in
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