The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
number
of people
changes who went for international transportation in different years.
Overall
it can be seen from the table that the people
who travel to Europe is
the most Correct subject-verb agreement
are
famouse
in every Correct your spelling
famous
periods
. Change to a singular noun
period
Additionally
, the number
of people
who travel to Middle
East is the Correct article usage
the Middle
leastest
. The table Correct your spelling
lowest
are
shown in Change the verb form
is
millions
.
It is apparent that ,
Europe was the most popular place that Remove the comma
apply
people
want
to Wrong verb form
wanted
went
, the Change the verb
go
number
of people
iwas
Correct your spelling
was
I was
incrased
from 280.2 to 400.2 Correct your spelling
increased
millions
between 1990 and 2005. Change to singular
million
Next,
Asia and the pacific
Capitalize word
Pacific
starting
at 60.2 Wrong verb form
started
miliions
in 1990 to 135.8 Correct your spelling
million
millions
millions
in 2005. And Change to singular
million
then
America starting at 80.5 miliions
in 1990 to 113.2 Correct your spelling
million
millions
millions
in 2005
Change to singular
million
However
, Africa and Middle
East Correct article usage
the Middle
was
Change the verb form
were
least
popular routes when Correct article usage
the least
compare
with other Change the form of the verb
compared
continental
. Replace the word
continents
People
who went to Africa and Middle
East Correct article usage
the Middle
starting
at 18.2 and 9.8 Wrong verb form
started
millions
in Change to singular
million
year
1990 and there Change the article
the year
was
28.7 and 15.8 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
people
in 2005 respectively.
To conclude
the total number
of people
who went to travel has trend to increase from 1990 to 2005 in every routes
.Change to a singular noun
route
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