The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
number
of
people
changes who went for international transportation in different years.
Overall
it can be seen from the table that the
people
who travel to Europe
is
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are
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the most
famouse
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famous
in every
periods
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period
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.
Additionally
, the
number
of
people
who travel to
Middle
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the Middle
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East is the
leastest
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lowest
. The table
are
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is
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shown in
millions
. It is apparent that
,
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apply
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Europe was the most popular place that
people
want
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wanted
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to
went
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, the
number
of
people
iwas
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was
I was
incrased
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increased
from 280.2 to 400.2
millions
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million
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between 1990 and 2005.
Next,
Asia and the
pacific
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Pacific
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starting
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started
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at 60.2
miliions
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million
millions
in 1990 to 135.8
millions
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million
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in 2005. And
then
America starting at 80.5
miliions
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million
millions
in 1990 to 113.2
millions
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million
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in 2005
However
, Africa and
Middle
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the Middle
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East
was
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were
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least
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the least
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popular routes when
compare
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compared
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with other
continental
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continents
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.
People
who went to Africa and
Middle
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the Middle
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East
starting
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started
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at 18.2 and 9.8
millions
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million
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in
year
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the year
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1990 and there
was
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were
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28.7 and 15.8
millions
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million
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people
in 2005 respectively.
To conclude
the total
number
of
people
who went to travel has trend to increase from 1990 to 2005 in every
routes
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route
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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