When you received a device ordered online you discovered that it was damaged. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: • Explain what you ordered and the problem with it; • Tell how important is this purchase to you; • Ask for solutions of the problem. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

Dear Manager, I am writing

thins

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this

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letter to inform you that I recently received a

device

form

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from

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your company.

However

, I

got

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have

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some problems with

this

device

I expect you

could

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can

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understand

about

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apply

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my

problrms

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problems

and you can take great

step

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steps

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to solve

this

un ancovenience

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inconvenient

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circumstance. First of all, I

order

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ordered

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this

tool

due to

I

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interest

with

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the advertising

in

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on

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the website,

there

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give

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information about the spesifications of the

device

eventually I

make

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decision

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the decision

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to order it.

In addition

, I am

goin

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going

to give you

explanation

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an explanation

the explanation

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about the trouble.

Firstly

, when I

open

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the

packeging

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packaging

I found

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a cracked

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cracked

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on the cover of

this

laptop,

along with

this

letter

i

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I

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will

sent

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send

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to you about the

damaged

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damage

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.

Moreover

, I felt disappointed with

this

situation

due to

I really need

this

device

to assist me in my exam next week, I expect that you can

create

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take

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great

step

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steps

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to cope

this

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with this

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problem. In my

perspective

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I want to

returned

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this

device

and you can change with the new product from your company.

Thanks

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you for your nice attention and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regard, Mr.Fhim