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some people say that to become a good teacher, you shoild aquire enough training, while others say that teaching capibilities can be developed with experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #teacher #shoild #aquire #capibilities
A good teacher needs both training and
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 amount of experience in order to do his/her job comprehensively. Enough training is needed because there are some basic rules or methods that should be taught to the educationist
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 to a teacher as a good one when they have lots of experience. Of course basis of all which the person should know to be a tutor has been taught, but an experienced teacher has their own methods in teaching and reacting to different students. Based on their background, they know how to behave in
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, an experienced schoolteacher knows how to manage
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 easily and they don't know how to make themselves calm. In conclusion, It's important for a master to be well educated and experienced because it's the future of a country who are learning and growing in school classes. If a tutor knows how to behave in
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 to pass their lessons with good marks and they will be more fund of continuing their studies.
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Coherence & Cohesion
Your essay provides a solid structure with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. However, aim to enhance the coherence by connecting your points more smoothly and using a wider range of linking words.
Task achievement
You've partially addressed the task by discussing both views and giving your opinion. However, incorporating more specific examples or evidence could strengthen your arguments and make your essay more persuasive.
Language accuracy
Try to avoid spelling and grammar mistakes to ensure your argument is clear and professional. Even small errors can distract the reader from your main points.
Task achievement
You effectively covered both sides of the argument and provided your own viewpoint, which aligns well with the essay's requirements.
Coherence & Cohesion
You demonstrated good knowledge on the topic with a variety of ideas and some examples, showing your ability to think critically about the topic.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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