The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The first bar chart illustrates
the
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information on the type of films that had been released,
while
the second bar chart depicts the sale of tickets in two different years, 1996 and 2006.
Overall
, it can be seen that most categories experienced upward trends in
both
released and ticket sales, with the exception of romance
film
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that
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remained unchanged for the number released and saw a decline in
selling
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sales of
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ticket
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tickets
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. Regarding
film
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films
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released,
both
years followed a similar trend, with drama
film
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films
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ranked
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the highest percentage, 25% in 1996, and 35% in 2006. Followed closely by comedy and fantasy, which gapped roughly 5% between
both
year
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.
However
, romance remained unchanged at around 7% throughout the period.
Conversely
, for
the
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cinema ticket sales, comedy outnumbered other types, with around one-fifth for
both
periods. The drama took second place with just over 15%. In 1196, it was followed by romance
movie
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, at 5%.
Nevertheless
, fantasy witnessed a considerable increase, by 8%, and took over the place in 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words both with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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