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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph provides information on the
production
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 of common fuels in Britain over a 20-year period, starting in 1981.
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, the graph clearly shows that the
production
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 levels of petroleum and natural gas experienced upward trends,
while
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 coal
production
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 decreased over the given period. In the beginning, in 1981, petroleum had the highest
energy
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units
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 produced, at approximately 90. It was closely followed by coal, with 80
energy
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units
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. Both fuels'
production
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 fluctuated until 1996.
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 petroleum experienced minimal increases and decreases, reaching around 140
energy
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units
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, coal
production
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 slightly declined and ended at nearly 35
energy
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units
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, making it the least produced fuel by 2000. Regarding natural gas, it
initially
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 had the lowest
production
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 levels, with just under 40
energy
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units
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. It remained relatively stable for a decade.
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, after that period, natural gas
production
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 in the UK increased significantly, peaking at about 100
energy
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units
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, surpassing coal and securing the second-highest position.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, energy, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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