These pie charts show the main reasons for studying English amongst the four most prevalent nationalities at a language school in the UK in 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

These pie charts show the main reasons for studying English amongst the four most  prevalent nationalities at a language school in the UK in 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
The pie graphs show the primary factors of the four common nationalities that pupils selecting a certain Britain college for learning English in 2007 and 1987.
Overall
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suitable degree courses were the dominant in both pies and accounted
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%, and 37% respectively. In other parts, the percentage of other sectors is
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different in both years. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that the second largest group in 2007 was the close to parental home.
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, in 1987, the quality of resources was 21% and it was the second biggest group. Close to
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home in 1987 was the smallest category and it was only 10% and in 2007 the
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one was good sports and social activities which
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only at 6%. The figures
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quality of resources and suitable degree courses were nearly the same at 17% to 18% in 2007.
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