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The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Contained in the two maps is information pertaining to changes which
happended
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happened
 in Westley
town
 from 1815 until now.
Overall
, it can be recognised that the
town
 has undergone massive development to include more residences, leisure amenities and a railway station now allowing easier access to London.
Additionally
,
although
 lots of
modification
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modifications
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 were made to modernise the
town
,
the
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Lake Lenton,
market
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Market
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 Square and
town
 Hall have remained untouched. Beginning with the northern half of the
town
, as far as the Lord
Westley'House
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Westley's
 was concerned, it has been replaced with the Red Lion and the Lenton Hotel. With respect to the several trees and the church in the opposite, they
was
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 destroyed to make way for a new museum and a new shopping centre. Just adjacent to the museum, the Coach Inn was demolished to build a sports Centre. Moving onto the southern part of the
town
, plenty of the houses were modernised into
a
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business and residential
area
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areas
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while
market
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the market
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 square and
town
 hall have remained the same. With the destruction of several fields, there was a new cinema
along with
 the expanded road which leads to the shopping, business and residential area.
Furthermore
, not only the fields but
also
 the bridge
were
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 knocked down to build the main railway station to go to London easily.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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