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the graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the information and write 150 words.

the graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the information and write 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates information on the common fuel produced in Britain in a 20-year period, starting in 1981.
Overall
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, it is apparent that
production
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 levels of petroleum and natural gas witnessed upward trends,
while
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 coal
production
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 reduced over the provided period.
Initially
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, in 1981, petroleum commenced at the highest
energy
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units
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 produced, with approximately 90.
This
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 is followed closely by coal, at 80
energy
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units
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. After that, both fuels
production
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 fluctuated until 1996.
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 petroleum rose and fell minimally to roughly 140
energy
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units
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, coal dropped slightly to finish at nearly 35
energy
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units
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, making it the least produced fuel in 2000. Moving on to natural gas, it began with the lowest
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 levels, with just under 40
energy
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units
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. It remained stable for a decade.
Thereafter
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, the
production
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 of natural gas in the UK rose sharply, reaching its peak at about 100
energy
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units
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, outnumbered coal to second place.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, energy, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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