The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The diagrams detail how the waterfront
area
of Darwin town changed from 2009 to 2014. It is apparent that the most significant change is the addition of green spaces at the expense of the industrial zone,
whereas
most facilities in
this
area
stayed the same over the years. In 2009, at the
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of the waterfront, there were two industrial areas of different sizes separated by the footpath
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and just 3 residential blocks located in the bigger industrial
area
. By 2014, those industrial zones had disappeared completely. In the smaller
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a new swimming pool was added near the lake. In the larger
area
, 3 new buildings and a university were constructed, and a number of green trees were planted.
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,
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the south-eastern coast of the town, a new
harbor
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was built, which could be accessed from the main road through a new footpath running through the green
area
. Regarding the remaining facilities, they experienced no change over the period. Along the road leading to the fishing
area
were the school and the convention, and it is of note that
this
fishing
area
,
together with
the two swimming pools nearby, remained unchanged.
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