Since most information about culture and history can be found online, museums and art galleries are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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everything,
museums
and art galleries are not excluded. Nowadays most
people
usually find their
information
from online
museums
or online
history
places
. I agree to some extent with
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topic, here I will explain about it. As a matter of fact, folk usually look to find some affordable ways to do their
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. because they need to save their
time
and money. Online
information
can provide many things for them without any extra budget and they can save their
time
on the other hand
, traffic is
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so, it is an important topic that most nation are escapee of it.
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many
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information
from
history
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platforms without any
limitation
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limitations
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.
Also
, most of them are very
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.
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a consequence, online
museums
and art galleries will be thrived in the future. The police have informed
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if we had not had online platforms, we would have faced
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some heavy
congestions
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. Of course, all
people
need to go to
history
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places
and
museums
and art galleries with their
family
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because children should be informed
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our
history
.
on the other hand
, going to
such
places
can
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their relationship with their family.
for instance
,
reporter
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has declared on television that many
people
have
fun
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time
in
such
palaces
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places
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because they not only get many
information
, but
also
, they have a great and fun
time
to gather. by the way, visiting
of
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this
place is an important topic in terms of psychology and sciences. Must experts said if
people
go to visit
to
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historical
places
and
museums
, they will be some knowledgeable individuals. In conclusion,
information
about culture and
history
through
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online can be useful but everyone should go to
such
places
in person.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersive
  • hands-on experience
  • interactive exhibits
  • preservation
  • cultural and historical artifacts
  • safeguarded
  • community engagement
  • heritage
  • authenticity
  • curated exhibits
  • scholarly input
  • misinformation
  • economic impact
  • tourism
  • emotional and aesthetic responses
  • atmosphere
  • ambiance
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