The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart represents the amount of money spent on health facilities as a percentage of the Gross Domestic Product in the

years

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2002, 2007 and 2012 in

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Europe.

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, Estonia had the lowest expenditure on health sectors in all the given 3

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and Switzerland can be identified as the most paid counties for

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medicine. Looking

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details, Switzerland ,Belgium and Estonia did not show a variation in expenditure in the provided

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, their percentages are 11, 10 ,and 3 respectively. France had a peak in the proportion of expenses for

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medicines in

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2007. It is interesting to note the expenses

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constant in 2002 and 2007 in all the European regions except in

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France.

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Denmark, Norway, Slovenia, Poland, and Lithuania, showed

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increased amount of paying outs in the year 2012 when

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with

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the other

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two

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the Netherlands

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Netherlands

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there was a downward trend in purchasing medical facilities from 2002 to 2012.

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