The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People seem to have contradictory views regarding whether gay marriage has become reasonable. I believe that the latter point of view is more convincing and applicable in most contexts. I fully support

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can bring about many positive outcomes. The advantages of

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marriage

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laws protection are undeniable and manifold. The first benefit it exposes us to different opinions and

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, which stimulates us to learn new things and broaden our horizons. We may

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be motivated to challenge existing norms and values.

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, more people no longer view

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love with special eyes, which can reduce the disrespect between humanity

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of understanding.

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, it is undeniable that gay marriage is legal

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is a commendable

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that can generate positive outcomes for individuals and society.

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manifests social responsibility and

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spirit. It can contribute to the resolution

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problems and the

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of the mindset of

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group. It cannot be ignored that there are some disadvantages associated with

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practice. One of the drawbacks is that paying extra for support

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or legal protection fees

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may exert unexpected financial pressure upon gay bunches, especially those in developing regions, where the income level and living standard are relatively low. Meanwhile, some people will use legal

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break the law things.

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, widely spreading the speech that same-sex love is the only normal relationship. Fortunately, there are some measures we can take to improve

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alarming situation. One of the possible solutions to

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problem is to enlist the support of influential public figures, inviting celebrities to promote the correct

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and

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opinions. In conclusion, I believe that the benefits of

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matter largely surpass the drawbacks, as it

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remarkable merits and the demerits are manageable.