WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information about the number of
attendence
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attendance
in Ashdown Museum the year after and before having been refurbished, inasmuch as the pie chart illustrates the results of individuals' satisfaction
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the
vurveys
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surveys
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which
were
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accured
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occurred
on
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those two years.
Overall
, the statistics show that not only the
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percentage
of visitors was
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increased
incresead
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increased
but
also
the rate of delighted
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feedbacks
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had
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a
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significant growth. By way of comparison , new refurbishment is reported to woo people to pay
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landmark visits. The table clearly shows the difference in
population
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of
Museum's
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the Museum's
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fans since the number had
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increased from 74000 to 92000
on
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the
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year later.
In addition
, the percentages of satisfaction levels were vary due on account of
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changes. With regard to
ones
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with the very satisfied point of view, there was a five-unit raise during those years.
Moreover
, satisfied spectators had a growth in
popullarity
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popularity
as well.
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