The majority of people believe that pupils should
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financial aid
instead
of using their
money
for the full cost
although
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education is not taken
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forChange preposition
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society as huge as for individuals.
This
writer absolutely disagrees with that argument and will explain the reason for her view.
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paying the full cost
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studyCorrect article usage
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process by yourself is advantageous for
students
. It can be seen that the amount of
money
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education would be
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if
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made an attempt
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hard
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,
also
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can make
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for them to try hard and pay attention
onChange preposition
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learning.
Additionally
, it
also
has more
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opportunities for
students
’ dependence, which
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the ability to manage time and learn how to balance between the job and
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of
study
. As
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,
students
can be free
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themselves and express
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oneselfCorrect pronoun usage
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, which
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isCorrect subject-verb agreement
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the
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for
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the process of human
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grownReplace the word
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.
However
, there are more beneficial for
students
to have assistance from society than paying
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from
individualFix the agreement mistake
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.
This
is because
students
should focus on the education universities
instead
of working hard to get
money
,
also
if they wanted to
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allChange preposition
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the price of
study
, it would pay a fortune.
Furthermore
,
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mental and
physicReplace the word
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will be affected
toChange preposition
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their lead to hinder the
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, so you will be exhausted and dominate the
study
process. Scholarships
are helpingWrong verb form
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mental
students
aspect, it will
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motivation,
feelFix the infinitive
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relaxWrong verb form
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when not heavily
aboutCorrect word choice
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money
. After graduation, you can pay back for the government and go on your work.
In conclusion,
this
argument
also
has a correct and incorrect part, but I still disagree with
this
situation.