The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates how much people are earned in average in the seven Britain
cities
. The data provided in pounds sterling and compare the Use synonyms
salaries
between five big towns in England and two large Use synonyms
cities
in Scotland. It is Use synonyms
noyicable
, that the Correct your spelling
noticeable
higher
amount of money is paid in capital of Correct word choice
highest
Englans
, London and the lowest in Birmingham. Correct your spelling
England
Dispite
the Correct your spelling
Despite
salaries
Use synonyms
are
Wrong verb form
being
veried
from region to region, there is no strong correlation between the number of the observed people and the level of their salary.
The largest average Correct your spelling
varied
salaries
are Use synonyms
registrated
in Correct your spelling
registered
london
, England, where people are paid 33,634, followed by Cambridge with 29,854 pounds sterling. The third place can be shared between Change the capitalization
London
the
Bristol in England and Edinburgh in Scotland, with Correct article usage
apply
appoximately
the same level of average yearly payment of 27,828 and 27,592 respectively. It is Correct your spelling
approximately
noteworthly
that despite the smallest number of Correct your spelling
noteworthy
observation
, Edinburgh Fix the agreement mistake
observations
still
among the highly earned Add a missing verb
is still
salaries
region among the presented.
The Use synonyms
cities
with the lowest wages are Birmingham, Manchester and Glasgow, Use synonyms
accounted
for roughly 25,5 , 26 and 26,1 thousand pound sterling respectively. Wrong verb form
accounting
Compare
to London, the Wrong verb form
Compared
avarage
wages in those Correct your spelling
average
cities
are only three quarters, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
they are not substantially lower Add a comma
however,
Linking Words
while
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apply
compare
to the rest of the places, with Wrong verb form
compared
gap
between 2.5 to 4 thousand pound sterling only.Add an article
the gap
a gap
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