The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Contained in two illustrations is the transformation of a village by the sea from 1995 until
present
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day. From an observational perspective, the small community has been redeveloped into a residential town with brand-new accommodations and leisure centres.
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, the cafe and the hotel remained intact. Beginning with the north-western half of the map, there was the construction of new houses along the original road stretching from the north to the south.
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, a short horizontal street was erected parallel to two newly built houses
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the buildings inside the rectangular road stayed the same. Moving onto the north-west, the agricultural land and the green space
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cleared in order to add a golf court and a tennis court. Turning to the south-western part, a new car park was opened beside the old hotel which was opposite the cafe.
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, the south-east experienced the most changes, starting with the removal of the signature harbour.
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, the fish market on the seashore was torn down and made way for seaside apartments.
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, the shops on the long horizontal road were repurposed into restaurants.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • seaside village
  • development
  • transformation
  • construction
  • residential area
  • commercial zone
  • infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • connectivity
  • recreational facilities
  • land use
  • economic activity
  • tourism
  • environmental impact
  • conservation efforts
  • natural reserve
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