The graph shows the differencies in wheat export over the three areas

The graph shows the differencies in wheat export over the three areas
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The chart depicts the wheat exportation of three places.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in
this
survey, most of the time, Canada was the highest exporting provider among others. An upward trend can be observed in the European Community in these 5
years
.
However
, Australia's performance was the opposite. It was decreasing in
this
5-year period. Looking at
this
graph more closely, one can see that Canada was the region which had the most export numbers in the beginning, and it was around 19.
Then
, it dropped slightly and reached 17
at
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1986. In the following
years
, it soared dramatically and peaked at 25 in 1988. The next year, it declined suddenly to 14. In the end, it gained about 4 in the 1990. The European Community figures went down at first.
Subsequently
, it was increasing in the
years
between 1986 to 1990.
Finally
, it
leveled
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off at 21. Australia's line ascended in the first year, but it kept falling steadily in the next four
years
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export
  • wheat
  • trade
  • produce
  • agricultural commodity
  • volume
  • metric tonnes
  • economic impact
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • domestic market
  • international market
  • export quota
  • trade barriers
  • comparative advantage
  • seasonal variation
  • supply chain
  • harvest
  • yield
  • competition
  • sustainability
  • forecast
  • logistics
  • subsidy
  • tariff
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