You want to sell some of your furniture and you think one of your friends might be interested to buy it. Write a letter to this friend. Why you are selling it. Describe the furniture he/she might be interested in. Invite your friend to have a look.
Dear Beto,
I hope condition
this
letter finds you in great condition and you are doing well, I am writing this
letter to inform you that I would like to offer to
you my esthetic table.
First of all, I Change preposition
apply
want
sell Add the particle
want to
this
furniture because I need money for
repair my car Change preposition
to
due to
I have
Wrong verb form
had
accident
Add an article
an accident
last
week.
secondly
, I would tell to you aboutAdd an article
the
the
furniture. Change preposition
of the
This
table made
in 2012 and the raw material is legendary wood from Indonesia, Add a missing verb
was made
has
great quality and Correct pronoun usage
which has
unique
motif Correct article usage
a unique
Correct pronoun usage
that look
look
elegant. I am going to give you Correct subject-verb agreement
looks
big
discount if Add an article
a big
you
interested Add a verb
you are
you were
with
Change preposition
in
this
table.
If you have free time I will invite you come
to my house to Add the particle
to come
checking
Change the form of the verb
check
this
furniture. Thanks
you for your nice Replace the word
Thank
attentionand
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regard,
Mr.AudreyCorrect your spelling
attention and
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structure
Consider revising the start of paragraphs to better introduce each topic for improved clarity and flow.
tone
Pay attention to maintaining a consistent and appropriate writing tone throughout.
detail
Try to enhance the description of the furniture by providing more detailed information.
task response
You successfully explained why you are selling the furniture.
formality
The greeting and closing statements are appropriately used, creating a friendly and respectful tone.
call to action
You effectively invited your friend to view the furniture, which is a good practice in such a scenario.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,