The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates how changed the number of smoking adult men in seven geographic regions during

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period of time and compares the data to the global statistics. The data is presented in

percentage

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from the total population and

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information about 2000 and 2015.

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, the general trend shows

reduction

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a reduction

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in number of the

smoke

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males during the decade with disparity between the countries. In 2000, the world's

avarage

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average

of smoking men accounted for approximately four to ten,

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in Armenia

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reached six and a half. Bangladesh

registrated

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roughly 60 per cent and Cuba made up slightly above 50%. The rest of the presented countries were below the

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average

,

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approximately a third of

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population in Egypt, Levanon and Mexico. The

smolest

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smallest

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percentages were

regestered

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in Australia, less than 30%. In 2015, the world

avarage

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average

of

male

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males

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who smoked reduced by around 5%. The same trend followed Armenia, Bangladesh, Mexico and Australia,

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which droped

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droped

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by 10%, 20%, 15% and 10% respectively. Cuba experienced the reduction as well, albeit not as

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as the aforementioned regions,

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accounted

for three percent only. In

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contrast, in Egypt and Levanon the proportion of smoking

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men rose

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substantially

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the

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avarage

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by 17% and 10% respectively.