The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015.

The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015.
The chart illustrates how changed the number of smoking adult men in seven geographic regions during
ten-year
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period and compares the data to the global statistics. The data is presented in percentages from the total population and depicts information about 2000 and 2015.
Overall
, the general trend shows
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reduction in number of the mature smoked males during the decade with disparity between the countries. In 2000, the
world
's average of smoking men accounted for approximately four to ten,
while
in Armenia
this
category reached six and a half. Bangladesh registered roughly 60 per cent and Cuba made up slightly above 50%. The rest of the presented countries were below the
world
's average, comprising approximately a third of the total population in Egypt, Levanon and Mexico. The smallest percentages were registered in Australia, less than 30%. In 2015, the
world
average of males who smoked reduced by around 5%. The same trend followed Armenia, Bangladesh, Mexico and Australia,
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by 10%, 20%, 15% and 10% respectively. Cuba experienced
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reduction as well, albeit not as sharp as the aforementioned regions,
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for three percent only. In stark contrast, in Egypt and Levanon the proportion of smoking grown-up men rose substantially, surpassing the
world
's average by 17% and 10% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduction" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • adult male smokers
  • world average
  • time frame
  • notable differences
  • trends
  • reductions
  • increases
  • smoking rates
  • global smoking trends
  • insights
  • summarize
  • overall trends
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