Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: * Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight * Explain how missing your flight impacted you * Clearly state what you would like the airline to do #flight #airport
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter in order to inform you about my recent flight schedule on
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apply
last
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the last
sunday
that Change the capitalization
Sunday
unfortunately
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unfortunately,
i
missed Change the capitalization
I
due to
some personal concerns.
Actually, I had make
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made
a reservations
for Business class seat No.23BC Correct the article-noun agreement
a reservation
reservations
during
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last
week on April 22th
.But,Change the ending
22nd
due to
some family uncertainty
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uncertainty,
i
was unable to travel.On that day, I was almost around to leave for my trip but suddenly my grandfather got a Change the capitalization
I
heartattrack
that made me shocked for a Correct your spelling
heart attack
while
.So i
quickly arranged an ambulance for assistance and Change the capitalization
I
i
brought my grandfather Change the capitalization
I
at
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to
hospital
.
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the hospital
Therefore
, this
incident effects
me badly because my visit was extremely imperative for me as it was related to my business conference Verb problem
affected
at
Mumbai.Change preposition
in
Moreover
, i
had paid a huge amount for my booking approximately one lakh.
So , my concern Change the capitalization
I
to
approach Add a missing verb
is to
on
you to provide me Change preposition
apply
some
sort of refund on my tickets or it Add the preposition
with some
could
be possible Verb problem
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if
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for
i
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me
decide
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to decide
on
hold Change preposition
to
this
booking for my future trip?I would be appreciate
it if you could understand me with positive feedback.
Looking forward to Change the verb form
appreciate
hear
back from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Preet.Change the verb form
hearing
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coherence cohesion
Work on organizing your paragraphs more effectively. Each paragraph should present a clear idea that relates logically to the others.
task achievement
Consider using a more formal tone in your writing. Certain phrases and expressions can seem too casual for formal correspondence.
task achievement
Revise punctuation and care with dates (e.g., 'April 22th' should be 'April 22nd'). This will improve the professionalism of your writing.
task achievement
You clearly described the situation that caused you to miss your flight, providing specific details about the incident.
task achievement
Your request to the airline is clearly stated, making it easy for the recipient to understand what you are seeking.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite