Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: * Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight * Explain how missing your flight impacted you * Clearly state what you would like the airline to do #flight #airport

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter in order to inform you about my recent flight schedule
on
Change preposition
apply
show examples
last
Change the article
the last
show examples
sunday
Change the capitalization
Sunday
show examples
that
unfortunately
Add a comma
unfortunately,
show examples
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
missed
due to
some personal concerns. Actually, I
had make
Wrong verb form
made
show examples
a reservations
Correct the article-noun agreement
a reservation
reservations
show examples
for Business class seat No.23BC
during
Change preposition
apply
show examples
last
week on April
22th
Change the ending
22nd
show examples
.But,
due to
some family
uncertainty
Add a comma
uncertainty,
show examples
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
was unable to travel.On that day, I was almost around to leave for my trip but suddenly my grandfather got a
heartattrack
Correct your spelling
heart attack
that made me shocked for a
while
.So
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
quickly arranged an ambulance for assistance and
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
brought my grandfather
at
Change preposition
to
show examples
hospital
Add an article
the hospital
show examples
.
Therefore
,
this
incident
effects
Verb problem
affected
show examples
me badly because my visit was extremely imperative for me as it was related to my business conference
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
Mumbai.
Moreover
,
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
had paid a huge amount for my booking approximately one lakh. So , my concern
to
Add a missing verb
is to
show examples
approach
on
Change preposition
apply
show examples
you to provide me
some
Add the preposition
with some
show examples
sort of refund on my tickets or it
could
Verb problem
apply
show examples
be possible
if
Correct word choice
for
show examples
i
Correct pronoun usage
me
show examples
decide
Fix the infinitive
to decide
show examples
on
Change preposition
to
show examples
hold
this
booking for my future trip?I would
be appreciate
Change the verb form
appreciate
show examples
it if you could understand me with positive feedback. Looking forward to
hear
Change the verb form
hearing
show examples
back from you. Yours Faithfully, Preet.
Submitted by kaurbhagwant95 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion
Work on organizing your paragraphs more effectively. Each paragraph should present a clear idea that relates logically to the others.
task achievement
Consider using a more formal tone in your writing. Certain phrases and expressions can seem too casual for formal correspondence.
task achievement
Revise punctuation and care with dates (e.g., 'April 22th' should be 'April 22nd'). This will improve the professionalism of your writing.
task achievement
You clearly described the situation that caused you to miss your flight, providing specific details about the incident.
task achievement
Your request to the airline is clearly stated, making it easy for the recipient to understand what you are seeking.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: