The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English Speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two bars illustrate the percentages of students studying ages between 14 and 16 years old, There were interesting new
languages
in English, While
the most popular three languages
students chose were French, German, and Spanish between 1984 and 2007.
Overall
, In 1984, the highest percentage
of the student group aged from 14 to 16 years, were contemporary in English, In contrast
, In 2007, the proportion of teenagers decreased significantly, In addition
, the three ranges of the subject in 1984 had per cent
highest half of French, German and Spanish, while
top three languages
had per cent
roughly one in four in 2007.
According to
the data, in 1984, there was 49 per cent
of girls studying
in English subjects, while
the lowest was 30 per cent
of boys. However
, In 2007, it was clear that there was
40 per Correct subject-verb agreement
were
cent
of girls, in contrast
, there were 25 per cent
of boys.
Furthermore
, in 1984, the most popular of the languages
interesting for students was 50 per cent
, while
the percentage
of Germans was 20 per cent
. However
, the lowest percentage
was 5 per cent
.
On the other hand
, in 2007, the percentage
of French, German, and Spanish was under 25 per cent
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