Money ought to be spent on new public buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, new public
buildings
are increasing steadily in different areas. Also
the existing Add a comma
Also,
one
is continue
to deteriorate. Undoubtedly, there are some people who believe that money should spent on new establishments rather than restructuring the previous Change the verb form
continues
one
. In my opinion, I slightly disagree with this
notion.
To begin
with, establishing a new building need
a large amount of Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
fundings
and there is no assurance that Fix the agreement mistake
funding
this
project will succeed or make profits. Although
,
the Remove the comma
apply
builder
are well-prepared or well-calculated, nobody precisely Fix the agreement mistake
builders
know
that it will be as Change the verb form
knows
like
as the expectation. Correct your spelling
likely
Moreover
, to construct something new need
carefulness and elaboration. If the Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
buildings
are built carelessly, it
will be destroyed easily. Correct pronoun usage
they
For example
, I’ve seen news about the building collapsed because the establishment is not up to the standard.
From my perspective, if the existing establishments are well-constructed. The renovation will be more
easier since the reconstruction does not need much money than constructing a new Change the word
apply
one
. Furthermore
, the
public Correct article usage
apply
building
like museums are sources of knowledge and ancient historical information. A lot of tourists will visit here and if it Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
move
to somewhere else, it will take more time to attract the tourists again. Change the verb form
moves
Thus
, renovating the building will make it more interesting and attractive along with
keeping in existence of
ancient architecture.
Change preposition
apply
To conclude
, there are both advantages and disadvantages in both views. According to
me, I prefer renovating the previous buildings
than
establishing a new Change preposition
to
one
. Since it maintain
previous memories, ancient culture and the identity of Change the verb form
maintains
buildings
. However
, the authority should be careful in making a decision because it will affect the livings
of citizens.Replace the word
lives
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