The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan.
The plan provides data and shows comparisons between the old days of 2010 compared to
current
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the current
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scene. In overview, there is a great change at University Campus
due to
the introduction of new buildings recently.
To begin
with, in 2010, there were only two constructions which are University Offices
as well as
student apartments.
Therefore
, those offices are now used as teaching departments of Arts and Science,
however
, currently they
also
built stores
as well as
a restaurant and
this
was done to provide students with dinner and lunch after lectures.
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Furthermore
, the lake was constructed again for them to view and swim during the summer period.
Moreover
, now there is a green lawn and a nice resting place for refreshments after classes and
this
is for those who want to smoke or play games there.
Lastly
, they
also
installed seating benches along the lake,
hence
,
this
clearly shows the great improvements from the year 2010 until today.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian pathways
  • accessibility
  • academic community
  • study spaces
  • digital archives
  • recreational areas
  • well-being
  • on-campus accommodation
  • technological infrastructure
  • innovative teaching methods
  • security measures
  • surveillance cameras
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