The diagram below shows a simple system that turn dirty water into clean water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of turning dirty
water
into clean water
.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are four main stages in making drinking water
. It starts with pouring unclean water
into a tank and ends with having a fresh glass of water
.
To begin
with, the plastic lid of the first barrel will be pulled up for pouring the contaminated water
which is collected from any sources into the barrel. The water
passes through three layers comprising sand, charcoal and gravel in order to segregate dirt or unedible substances from the unclean water
.
Additionally
, the second storage drum is set below the first one due to
the water
always moves from the higher to the lower point. The clean water
from the previous procedure runs through a small pipe in order to store
in the second drum. Wrong verb form
be stored
Furthermore
, a tap is installed in the bottom part of the storage, thus
people are enable to turn it on to get the drinking water
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