The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given line graph illustrates the statistics on European health expenditure in three different years, 2002, 2007 and 2012.

Overall

, it can be seen that there are not

much

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changes in all

countries

throughout the period. Switzerland

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by far

utilize

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their

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money on health more than other

countries

whereas

Estonia

spend

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the least.

To begin

with, Estonia, Poland, and Lithuania were the three

countries

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spend

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the least at around 6% of

GDP

. Estonia remained unchanged at 3% of

GDP

while

the other two

countries

stayed constant in 2002 and 2007,

thereafter

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experienced a minimal increase of 1% in 2012. In all provided

period

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, Switzerland is the country

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that spend

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spend

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spends

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highest ,with approximately 11% of

GDP

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the GDP

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. Followed closely behind is Belgium at 10% of

GDP

. In 2007,

France

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France's

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percentage had

rise

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risen

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to the same

levels

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level

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Switzerland

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Switzerland's

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However

, it dropped to nearly 9% in 2012. The remaining

countries

witnessed

slightly

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change over a decade, with around 8-10%.

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