One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - apologise for missing the birthday celebration; - explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend; - and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry.
Dear Bayu,
I am writing
this
latter
regarding your Correct your spelling
letter
brithday
celebration, I Correct your spelling
birthday
am really apologize
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really apologize
about
that Change preposition
apply
i
forgot to Change the capitalization
I
anttand
your party Correct your spelling
attend
due to
i
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I
has
several activities.
I understand your Wrong verb form
had
a
special day is important for memorise because Correct article usage
apply
this
moment one time one year however
i
did not attend so sorry Change the capitalization
I
for
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about
this
, i hope you became
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become
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct your spelling
better
batter
than before and your dream quickly you get
As you know Correct your spelling
better
i
have a Change the capitalization
I
lot
activity at home and assist my parents, Add the preposition
lot of
firstly
i
catch up deadline at my company because very crucial, Change the capitalization
I
for
instance
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instance,
i
must Change the capitalization
I
finised
reporting data Correct your spelling
finish
analisis
and write a journal. Correct your spelling
analysis
secondly
so far my father has Add a comma
secondly,
headceh
so that way Correct your spelling
headache
i
go to Change the capitalization
I
hospil
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hospital
to
consultation and take some Change preposition
for
Correct your spelling
medicine
madicent
I Correct your spelling
medication
am promise
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promise
to
you Change preposition
apply
i
Change the capitalization
I
would visited
your home after Wrong verb form
will visit
i
have a few Change the capitalization
I
activity
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activities
firstly
i
must make Change the capitalization
I
planning
for Fix the agreement mistake
plans
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schedule
scheduled
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the scedhule
scedhule
after that Correct your spelling
schedule
i
will bring you some reward regard Change the capitalization
I
i
Change the capitalization
I
was
late give you Replace the word
being
supprise
not only that Correct your spelling
surprise
i
will invite you Change the capitalization
I
for
free eat at Change preposition
apply
restourant
i looking forward hearing to Correct your spelling
restaurant
restaurants
you
your Change preposition
from you
sinceerly
,
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sincerely
habib
Change the capitalization
Habib
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General
Make sure to attend to spelling errors, especially in key words such as 'birthday' and 'attend'. This can greatly improve the clarity of your message.
Coherence & Cohesion
To enhance coherence, consider using clearer and stronger transitions between ideas. For example, when shifting from apologizing to explaining your absence, a phrase like 'The reason for my absence is' could provide a smoother transition.
Coherence & Cohesion
For a stronger structure, organize your letter into clear paragraphs: one for your apology, one to explain your absence, and another to offer how you'll make up for it. This helps the reader follow your points more easily.
Task Achievement
To fully achieve the task, make sure to directly address all parts of the prompt. While you did apologize and explain, ensuring that your way of making up is clearly outlined and heartfelt will strengthen your response.
General
Consider adjusting the tone to be slightly more formal by avoiding contractions ('I am' instead of 'i am') and using complete words ('hospital' instead of 'hospil', 'medicine' instead of 'madicent'). This suits the context of an apologetic letter better.
Content
Your heartfelt apology and intention to make amends are clear.
Content
Including specific details about your reasons for missing the birthday provides credibility to your explanation.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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