The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2021.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Provided bar chart depicts the top nation-states that will use and generate electricity in 2021.
Overall
it can be observed that production-oriented
countries
have higher production and consumption trends,
while
the rest of the economies have descending order in electricity patterns. The following essay will describe the performance of Asian, European, south and
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countries
in producing and consuming energy.
To begin
with, Asia has a significantly high share of everything making and using; China is the leader, followed by India, twice less than China.
While
Japan and South Korea have a rather insignificant share of energy production and consumption.
However
, Russia is located fourth in
this
chart. The European
countries
are mostly ranked in a lower position, Germany being ninth and France being tenth with 565 billion kWh produced. North and South America have rather
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diverse locations on the scale, United States being in second place twice less than the leader China.
While
Japan and Canada take up the sixth and seventh ranks
consequently
.
To sum up
, Asian
countries
are more competitive compared to Europeans,
while
America stands in the mean of the consumption and production chain of electricity in 2021.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual aspect
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • industrial base
  • population size
  • significant difference
  • surplus
  • deficit
  • electrical energy
  • ranking
  • economic patterns
  • industrial patterns
  • technological advancements
  • disparity
  • industrial development
  • economic capabilities
  • anomalies
  • export
  • import
  • energy efficiency
  • waste
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