The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020.

The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020.
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Contained in the illustration is the information pertaining to the rates of workers in
five
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the five
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most contributed industrial sectors in Canada from 1850 to 2020. From an observational perspective, services and construction experienced an upward trend
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the opposite trend was found in manufacturing agriculture/fishing and energy/water.
Additionally
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, the service industry dominated the other categories. Looking at the graph in
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detail, the service sector stood at 33% in 1850 but jumped to 81% in 2020 which outnumbered everything else.
Similarly
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, the construction factor started at only 5% in 1850, increasing steadily by 3% in 2020. Turning to the remaining considered groups,
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manufacturing was most common among employees between 1850, it soon submerged to 9% in 2020. The same pattern can be seen in agriculture/fishing and energy/water where they began at 22% and 3% respectively.
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, both of them dropped to the same proportion in the next 170 years, at 1% each.
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