Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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many reasons

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it is a good idea to permit

children

to make their own

choices

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to better

decisions making

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for their future.

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others have an opinion that if

children

make their own

choices

on everyday subjects it can have negative consequences in different

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community

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as individual personality. We will consider both sides of the discussion in

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essay. On the one hand, opponents have a frame of mind that, if

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on their everyday issues it can

leads

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to many irrational

out come

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in society

such

as selfish and

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, because of raising youth by their own

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leads to educate many rebellious who only think about their own wishes.

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,

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can not

to

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recognize right between wrong.

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is a huge

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that can be dangerous for

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, proponents have an idea

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decisions

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in

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their life

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is

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essential for them in different situations.

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, if youngsters can decide about their issues in their childhood

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have

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experience

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in their life which can be effective

foe

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their next

decisions

.

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, making

decisions

by teens in their childhood could impact

on

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their future.

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leads to

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children

who can be independent in their future living. In conclusion, I would tend to side with the opponents because making

decisions

by teens can lead to being selfish.

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it is comprehensible for some to accept youths allowing

children

to make their own

choices

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