The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.
Contained in the image is information relating to the number of
patients
who visited the hospital for different illnesses between 2010 and 2016.
Overall
, it can be seen that all the categories saw an increase with the exception of birth control, which remained unchanged. Additionally
, birth control and eye are always higher than the other types throughout the time frame.
First of all, the number of eye patients
increased slightly to exactly 150 people
in 2012. After that, it rose significantly and reached 300 people
at the end
. The figure of people
who go to the hospital for birth control fluctuated from the beginning and turned back to the starting point of just under 250 patients
.
Turning to the remaining statistics, diabetes saw a gradual increase from 60 to 90 people
between 2010 and 2014. Subsequently
, it grew to 18 patients
in 2016. The number of dental patients
started at exactly 100 patients
at the beginning, then
it decreased to nearly 50 patients
in 2012 before increasing to approximately 130 patients
at the end
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