The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart displays how much
electricity
was produced and consumed by 10 nations within the year 2024.
Overall
, the
production
of
electricity
surpassed its consumption in all countries except for Germany. There are five countries that produce more than 700
billion
kWh
in 2024 and the highest producer amongst these five countries is China, with a total
electricity
production
of 5.398
billion
kWh
. The United States was in second place with a total
electricity
generated of around 4.000
billion
KWh
followed by Russia, Japan, and India with a total
electricity
produced of less than 20
percent
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of China’s
production
respectively. The remaining five nations generated not more than 700
billion
kWh
with the Republic of Korea as the
last
country, producing a total
electricity
of less than 500
billion
kWh
. With regard to consumption, China
also
ranked first with total usage of
electricity
of more than 5000
billion
kWh
. The sequence of ranking of
electricity
consumption is the same as the
electricity
production
ranking, except that Germany consumed more
electricity
than it produced, making it experience an
electricity
deficit of around 50
billion
kWh
.
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  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
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