The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
The above Diagram depicts the general shift in population numbers in a select few
counties
starting from the year 1940 to 2000., situated in the state of Oregon.
Overall
, it can be seen the
counties
are termed with their respective names; Columbia in green, Yamhill in blue and Washington in yellow along the X-axis of the concerned graph. Another feature mentioned close to them is the years on a similar axis horizontally,
while
the total community figures are listed on a more vertically Y axis.
Firstly
, it is noticeable that the Yamhill and Columbia
counties
experienced an increase in community between the 1940s and 1970s
while
this
picks up a significant increase
after
this
timeline up until 2000's,
Furthermore
,
also
figures for Yamhill county remain slightly higher than Columbia over the aforementioned period.
Secondly
,
In Contrast
, Washington County faced a similar trend to other regions, albeit with a much more increased difference in people quantities which is more in number. Conclusively, it is apparent that the wider pace and number of the total populace has a somewhat similar pattern amongst the three
counties
with divergent variance shown in one of them.
Submitted by toqeer44 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words counties with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.

Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS

Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population change
  • significant increase/decrease
  • growth rates
  • economic opportunities
  • migration patterns
  • environmental conditions
  • rapid growth/decline
  • industrial development
  • natural disasters
  • governmental policies
  • historical data
  • economic conditions
  • environmental sustainability
  • technological advancements
  • social implications
  • economic implications
  • environmental implications
  • infrastructure demands
  • natural resources
  • community life
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!