The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts provide information on a children's charity's revenue from six different sources and its expenditures
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three areas in a year. In general,
this
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organization received more
donation
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donations
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than it spent,
however
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, the two total amounts were not
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a large difference ($53,561,580 and 53,224,896 respectively).
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part of the income was from donated food and was spent mostly on Program Services. Looking into the details, Donated Food was by far the largest proportion of the earnings at 86.6% which was eight times more than the
second largest
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revenue from Community Contributions at 10.4%.
Prgram
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Program
Revenue accounted for 2.2% which is
sligtly
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slightly
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other
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three incomes, Investment Income (0.2%), Government Grants (0.2%) and Other Income (0.4%). In the same year, the charity expended money on three fields. Program Service covered almost all the expenditure at 95.8%,
left
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only 4.2% composed
by
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Fundraising and Management and
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General
, to be more precise, at 2.6% and 1.6% respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • children's charity
  • expenditure
  • income
  • donations
  • individuals
  • corporations
  • government grants
  • administrative costs
  • fundraising activities
  • direct aid
  • disparities
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • balance
  • implications
  • operations
  • future focus
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