The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the developments which took place in the town of Stokford between 1930 and 2005.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals from a largely rural to a mainly urban area . In the year 1930, the village had a lot of farms and many animals with a large garden, but during the next 75 years, the village saw a number of significant changes.
On the west side of the main road
, in the south, the farmland disappeared and a square land
appeared. The shops along the main Change preposition
of land
road
were demolished and replaced by a new road
across to the river Stock
Looking at the east side of the main road
, the farmland next to the northeast corner of the bridge was removed , and the new road
was added to the north of the primary school . Further
developments that can be noted is the extension of primary school. Moreover
, around the houses and the primary school, the retirement home was developed.Submitted by s_syedy on
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