The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps depict the changes in Seaville’s coastal village from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the coastal village witnessed
a
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dramatic development throughout the period of 30 years, including the construction of new roads and houses. In the year 1980, the land located east of the river by
East
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Bank was clear of roads and constructions. There was
also
a tea room and sand dunes by the sea. To the west of the holiday cottage was a marsh, and there was a woodland to the north.
In addition
, a small hotel
also
stood next to the holiday cottages.
However
, the coastal village developed substantially by 2010. To the east of the river by the East Bank that remained, new roads and retirement villages were built. Along the sea, a new hotel and restaurant had been built in place of the tea room and sand dunes. The holiday cottages were demolished and replaced by permanent houses, but the small hotel remained untouched. To the north, a golf course was created in place of the woodland.
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